All Comments on 'Lingerie Lust Ch. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
You need to have a Chapter 3

Your build up in chapter one was fantastic, chapter two was also very erotic but there isn't enough of it. It's too short - not the worst criticism you could get *G* add some more story weight to chapter 2 or you could continue in a chapter 3

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
i agree

this was a hot story and i wish to hear more in chapter 3 if there is one!

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Please Please More

Loved it more please

duddle146duddle146over 17 years ago
Sensuous and Erotic!

Maybe 'cause I may be a bit dense; this story finished with a pleasant surprise - Mommie and Daughter getting it on. I always knew lingerie was sexy - but this story really brings that out big time!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
Dildo pants

When do we hear about the special pants you bought? Great story.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago

Lovely story

And a minor quibble:

@"I kissed my way down to her breasts and sucked her amazing nipple into my mouth,"

2 breasts, 1 nipple ? Is the nipple amazing because it sit in the valley between her breasts ? :D

love VvV

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