All Comments on 'The Hell in Your Eyes Ch. 02'

Nix my comment from the previous chapter. I see a magic cock appearing.

I'm going to make it do tricks you've never seen before, Jim. (Winks)

Very realistic. Seven men recently convicted in Oxford of abduction and rape of schoolgirls.

In that case I shall continue to read just to see if he can self combust or disappear up his own arse.

I agree, dont make her suddenly start looking forward to it or eager because now he's shown her it can feel good and she'll suddenly start wanting and waiting for him because hey he raped me but he also makes me cum

im hopeful though, it looked like she kind of understood that cumming does not equal consent.

And yay, no magic cock.

Glad to see another author pop up in noncon who can write an actual story that also includes the dark stuff. With ch 2 of this and ch 5 of traitors daughter, it's been a very hot evening! Please keep writing, ignore the magic cock comments and write what works for you. You're kicking ass on the dark side, and it's hot. ^_^ looking forward to more!

I love the story line rape is rape. How call in love with their rapist. I want to see her come out on top in the end . How about she castrate's him with here last blow job or a boy friend get revenge. Serves him right.

Most non-consent/reluctance stories are more on the "reluctant" side. But this is truly non-con, and I guess it took me a bit by surprise. I really enjoyed your Ache Of Rapture, but I guess the fact that it was brother and sister took a bit of the edge off---since they already knew each other and cared for each other. This guy is evil, as others have said. I know he cares and feels bad to an extent, but he certainly doesn't show it. His actions have proven that he is only interested in number one. And yet, the scenes are so incredibly intense, especially the scene where he fucks her hard and fast. That got me going like not much else. Excellent, and I will keep reading.

Love it! And I know this is probably weird or wrong of me..but I want them together! Hope it happens :)

Is it crazy that my bf is totally like that man? I'm falling in love!! Possessive, hot, demanding, controlling but also has a soft side. If only he was older ;)

always_yes ; thank you, now I'm going to have to go reread that as soon as I'm done rereading this. Omg both authors need to update asap!!

Finally a male author who realizes that if a girl is raped that instantly when he penetrates her she realizes she has wanted him all along is total crap. And he can understand that getting wet and enjoying being fucked are not the same thing. Evolution has conditioned women to moisten when they believe they are going be penetrated as a defense mechanism to ease pain and tearing.. It's an automatic response is all.

I hate to burst your bubble... but I'm a chick. (Winks)

And just as quickly as I envied Sam I realize I don't want to be like her....why couldn't he have disappeared for a long time? Months would be acceptable. Two weeks?

I am a masochist and this is relationship goals.

She really needs to bite his dick totally off.

Loving this, fucking hell it's quite a read