All Comments on 'One Night Stand Ch. 01'

Great kick off lets see what is ahead

Excellent beginning.

What an entertaining, well written story. Please post more soon!

and to shine in further adventures one never wins while laying prone. TK U MLJ LV NV

Wow, I’m in awe again. Your writing skills are incredible, in one brief page we have the life story of this woman who’s been treated like shit by the man who supposedly loved her. Emotionally scarred and hurt she’s planning to or at least hoping to conceive a baby without the ‘sperm donor’s’ consent. Morally ambiguous? Perhaps. Every child deserves loving parents but just as we’re feeling sympathetic towards the unsuspecting donor we discover he’s not an innocent bystander.

It’s utterly heartbreaking but compelling and mushy romantic that I am I’m desperately hoping for a HEA amongst this clusterfuck of a mess called life.

tazz317 - In this context “no strings” actually means an assignation without any preconceived commitments associated.

Tess (UK)