by alexcarr
Nice story,however the type o's were a bit distracting. Still a 4 star read.
The typos are too much. Not to mention there isn't a single highway near Swansea, lived there most of my life and don't know a single one. Motorways, maybe, no highways.
"Grasping my whatsits" why be cryptically vague when in the next paragraph you're going to use a name like horny Joe?
Take a breath and work through your ideas slowly to get the details right. That way you might avoid the typos too.