All Comments on 'Guys like Tom'

by alexcarr

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63lsmith63lsmithover 9 years ago
NICE STORY

Nice story,however the type o's were a bit distracting. Still a 4 star read.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Oh dear...

The typos are too much. Not to mention there isn't a single highway near Swansea, lived there most of my life and don't know a single one. Motorways, maybe, no highways.

"Grasping my whatsits" why be cryptically vague when in the next paragraph you're going to use a name like horny Joe?

Take a breath and work through your ideas slowly to get the details right. That way you might avoid the typos too.

alexcarralexcarrabout 9 years agoAuthor
It is only fiction!

It is not true. Merely fiction okay?

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