All Comments on 'Jeremy's School Bully: The Ending'

Best story I've ever read. So much passion and intimacy. I'm gonna read this so much Ty

absolutely loved it....:)))))

Very glad you chose to continue and conclude this story. Literotica has like 99% unfinished stories (with the exception of the stories in Romance maybe), and they are so much better with a good ending. I was also very happy it ended up being 5 pages. I feared 2 but could only dare hope for 3, so to scroll down and see it was actually 5 pages left a smile on my face :)

I'm a sucker for the actual epilogues though so personally I would've liked the epilogue here to be a bit longer, maybe a few more paragraphs showing the daily lives of the 10-years older and now married couple - still in love with and lusting for eachother. That was the one thing that was missing for me, but other than that (which would only really be the cherry on top) it was perfect and one of my new favorites.

P.S. Any idea what happend to Anasheya? Not to pry or anything but just curious if you know and she isn't hurt or something~. If you don't want to reply here you're welcome to PM me or something. I'd appreciate it :)

Great story. Tremendous passion between them. Definitely enjoyed the fact that it was a longer story than many that grace this site. Well written and edited. Fantastic.

I've been a reader and fan of yours for years and years. Before this story, T-Girl Fairy Tale (Cinderfella) was my favorite story of yours. Now, this is. :)

I cried first time ever on a story

I'm a trans woman and instead of having an orgasm I'm crying my eyes out...

I loved it so much, Im really happy they are both happy

a tgurl love story who'd of thunk it :)

Bravo bravo!! (clap) (clap) (clap) (clap)

This story is gonna enter into anals of literotica.

People will still say, even after years gone, this one was his finest!

I too cried first time when Jeremy took a stand (or rather punch) for Lana.

And later on page 5 i was crying from joy - and at the same time being horny when Jeremy ask Lana could she be that dominant persona in bed again - I almost got heart attack.

This story is super-weird-special, among other things; tears from joy and cum from my X%&# were flowing at the same time.

These kind of dynamics between characters like this amazonian woman(well she had an extra thing) and submissive man are my favourite.

I dont know how the author plans on TOPping this story, but it will be hard!

I read Part 1 a couple years ago. Part 2 was worth the wait.

Just the perfect ending to tug at the heart strings. well done.

this is absolutely a wonderful moistly hot story, fantastic indeed !

Why do I cry like a girl when I dress fem and read something like this. Aaaahhhh romance. Mmmmm

Rebecca

babydollrebecca@yahoo.com

Ruwild:

Once again you've written a fantastic story and I do always look forward to what you have next. I do hope that you'll continue the series Jessie's dream job. I wait patiently and excitedly for that.

Jeremy's School Bully was one of your stories that despite being well written with a vivid sex scene I just couldn't really like because of the cruelty and the ending.

This follow up has made up for that and then some, by characterizing Lana this first story is now far more readable for me and not to mention you delivered both sex and emotion wonderfully.

Thank you for another great story.

Omg it took forever but finally! I have been looking for this one for a long time :) still remain your loyal fan :) keep it up!

Lana! LANA! LANAAAAAAAA!

Big fan of your work.

This is the Best story I read on literotica with proper emotions, lust, sex & with proper end.

Superb writing & would like to read more... Keep it up...

I love your stories omg and this one was by far one of the best out there, all the drama, the sex and sweetness and sadnedd just all of it superb. I was hoping there was going to be some sort of rival thing between other girls and jeremy, like barbara or eva or Lana's girl group, but still a great and amazing story :)

To all of you that have left comments here saying that you liked this story I want to say...Thank you.

Just, wow. Thanks for sharing with us man. Thank you

icarr

Best story ever written, wish I had found my Lana while in high school ! Still hoping there is one out there for me !

Needs a sequel, I fingered myself and jacked off 3 times during this story!

I didn't think I'd like the story of Lana and Jeremy when I read the first part. I felt bad enough for the guy that my eyes became moist. But like Jeremy I grew to like it. I love how the characters evolved in intimacy and the story was well written and touching.

I have a thing for femdom and transsexuals and the story got me really hot and bothered.. as it will many more times over. People think erotic stories are shallow but they're really not. Ones like this can touch a person deeply and have them look into themselves.

Well done, five stars easily. Out of any story I've ever read this is my absolute favorite. You have a talent for this and surprised me with the depth of the story.

At fist the story eas like one sided but after sometime i love every word of it and its characters and story.

Bestselling....

Keep the good work up

A *psychologist* has a PhD while a *psychiatrist* has graduated from medical school.

i really enjoyed this story, a nice read with a happy ending.

You outdid yourself with this long story. Hard to believe how it could have been any better. You rock!

Just fantastic story, this not only have sex but romance too

Really u couldn't have let him fuck her at least a few times make it that kind of relationship but u just had to make it that story. I hate it.

i absolutely loved this story. I didnt stop reading the story till it was the end. Magnificent job!

I am SO glad it worked out this way! He couldn't fuck her.... it would be against his submissive nature. I'm also glad that she didn't panty him. It could have been hot.... but that's a different story. Ignore the jerks. Every writer here gets them.

1 star.

Its a brilliant story. Would like to more chapters of it.

Dont listen to the negativity this was fantastic!!!!!!!! I couldnt stop reading and was very sad to get to the end. I wanted it to go on forever!!! I think this is and probably will be forever one of my favorite stories

One of the best i've ever read, brilliant content. Well done!

Please make more Chapter, maybe about the Wedding , the honeymoon, maybe Lana put Jeremy in a chastity belt, make a chapter about theirs marriage life etc, how their life toghether evolve etc

the story is just perfect, you need make more chapters

I love this story and have come back to it many times. Great characters, dialogue, sex. An amazingly developed piece. Thank you!

I totally enjoyed this story. What started out as a rape evolved into a really good love story. I hope you write more about this sexy couple.

Perfect love story. He killed the damn evil cruel shemale bitch by his kindness. Perfect ending and no need for more of this story. Hope you can keep writing stories like this. Would be perfect for a Galgame

A lot

Really enjoyed thank you so much

BEST STORY HANDS DOWN even if it took 5 years to finish. It was well worth the wait. THX.

Thank you! Thank you soo much! God bless you for writing the story!! It was my best read on this site. Everything was just perfect. The starting, content and most of all the ending!! Thank you so much!! I hope that you write more stories like this in the future... :)

FUck BB

I love the taboo stories with strong romance. This was worth the read.

A boy getting cummed in his anal pussy by a girl while being like girl like role multiple times is fantastic!

Ahh, the old "someone did it to me, so it's okay that I do it to others" defense. And to think all it took to cure her was someone being nice...yeah, that's believable.

"Lana did her best to make amends to all of the guys she had taken. Some accepted, some didn't, and some pretended not to know what she was talking about."

The word is 'raped' not 'taken.' Seriously, sugarcoating it only makes it more ridiculous. And what does 'make amends' mean? I'm not so sure that a simple 'I'm sorry' is gonna make up for having to see the person who raped you every day at school. I feel like you should have also included a line about not being able to make amends with some of her victims because they had already committed suicide. Ya know, at least add some realism.

And what a way to wrap things up. She suffers no consequences for her horrible actions and lives happily ever after. Yay, the rapist gets a happy ending!!

This is one of THE MOST sexy and beautiful stories I've ever read

I loved all the details about the characters and their past lives I felt like I could see lana. I very much enjoyed this story my only comment is that I wish you had dragged it on into a a longer story. It was amazing and I hope you come up with another

Maybe Jeremy and lanas son or daughter going thew kind of the same event. Thank you so much for writing this please please please write more just like this

I’m drowning in my emotions right now... you wrote this? Is this real? Can this really happen? Why is this story so amazing? I don’t know what to do with my feelings and these thoughts, is that what I need, because I definitely want it? You found the bitch switch in my soul, excuse my sacrilege, and just squeezed until it nearly exploded painful ecstasy (and that’s not a masturbation or prostate-related euphemism, it’s how I really fucking feel). Now the story is over and your hand is gone, but my heart yearns for something in the weak little knot in my chest (and throat apparently).

This isn’t smut, I need this in print. Do you even still write? How did you come to write this? Where does this come from? What is the style, genre, tropes, and or characters of this epic, if I could know for what I seek by names?

Femdom can be hot, but most of it just feels like porn gimmicks, distanced curiosities, or “service-y“ for lack of a better word but whatever ’this’ is feels like (vicariously of course) the carnal intimacy I crave.

I’m a 30 yr old black dude trying to live intentionally and honestly, fuck all the norms, I just want to be wanted, taken, and used as if I complete somebody, I need to please, give, and be useful on her terms like I know you feel me!?...

TMI, I know I’m overthinking a should’ve been simple (now prolly super cringeyass) comment on literotica, but Fuck I just want to love and be loved, I just want to earnestly (no ulterior notices) make the love of my life the happiest person ever, why is that so difficult for me and yet you did it in text? Jeremy and Lana won despite absolutely horrendously tragic initial conditions, is that what true love requires, personality-shifting-trauma and heartbreak?

If I had any critique, if that’s what comments are actually for (rather than my emotional diarrhea), I could’ve done without Lana’s bombshell body. Don’t get me wrong, I’d probably have lost my mind if Lana had been a sculpted (not lean, hulking) olympian goddess of raw power and athleticism and bombshells are also undeniably attractive, but it was the dynamic that truly made this story for me.

Thank you so much... I need to live my life.

The first part riled me up like crazy but then it had to go down the romance path. And here I thought I had stumbled upon a good abuse story that doesn't end up with Stockholm and mushy romance

I kind of agree with illwind, she was far too cruel and violent to make her redemption credible or deserved. And Jeremy is to much of a total bottom martyr, hes kind of a Mary Sue. I guess their total dom total sub relationship was consensual so ok, conflicted I guess. I hate rape stories, even happy ending rape stories, if thats even truly possible.

OMG...truly an amazing story of redemption. What a Great story!!!!! Ok..following you now as one of my favorite authors. Damn...now I have to go and read all your other stories ;-) Please don't ever stop writing. You were meant to do this. Thank you!!!!!!!

Amazing story! Thank you! 💜

I read this story often can't get enough thx very much 💘 💘 💘 it

Rubbish grammar and spelling.

The biggest criticism i have is what rape does to a person makes a romantic side unrealistic, the act itself is not only physically damaging but emotionally as well. I get that its literotica but the facts are to fall in love with your rapist and to have such apathy toward a rape victim it doesnt have a realistic feel to it. My point is while i love reformed love i love a bad guy falling for the good girl which in turns softens his heart but the extreme lengths of sexual dominance to that degree just doesnt make it feel realistic otherwise i appreciate the effort but the cruelty was just too much to gain any arousal from it these two have no fiuture together unless he visits her in prison for being a serial rapist which seems like she would like that place a lot better then jeremy can be with a woman that actually likes him they dont need to be a tgirl to be dominant women can be even more dominant than men otherwise good effort its just my two cents worth.

EXCELLEEEEEEEEEENT!!! Specially for that last punch(literally) line, HAHAHAHA. I'm not too exigent with the construction of the characters, practically not at all, I just look for a nice hot reading, doesn't matter how unrealistic they are. Kudos for this one. A hot story turns better with a background, and this is 👍🏿👍🏿👍🏿👍🏿. Nothing more to say

Best story ive read in this category in over a year.

I really enjoyed this love story. I liked how other people cared for Lana and helped Jeremy understand there was something else to hear.

Jeremy proved that he wasn't weak because he enjoyed having Lana domanate him , helped Lana know the difference between being cruel and dominating someone.

Lana proves her love by knocking out the man trying to once again insult her man. Great job

I'm sorry but... she KILLED HER BROTHER! I can't get past the fact that she's a murderer on top of a rapist bully!

Horrible

Eh. Hello.? Rape is not sex. It’s violence. Far different than consensual submission. Duh.

I don’t normally defend rapists but, @Argon123 ….she didn’t kill anyone. She transitioned. Killing the male side of herself. I don’t know how that wasn’t immediately clear to anyone that read this .

As for the story, total bullshit. Total rapey bullshit

So good and funny and sad and sexy. Loved it 5 stars

Funny how none of them have left offspring.