by Midday_Crisis
I usually get annoyed by manipulative bastards/bitches in stories but oddly i found Mary rather sweet in her own way. I would like it if this became a series.
Best of luck.
I don't normally read these kinds of stories but, I gave this one a chance. It was surprisingly good. I liked all three characters very much. Thanks for sharing an awesome story.
Reality bites! Fantasy is much more fun.
Good story.
Found myself rooting for them and wanting more...Very Nice! Just the right mix of a beautiful fantasy from an older guy's point of view; with the semi-crazy mix of contradictory impulses that define many, particularly young, women. Enjoyed it very Much!
My only wish is that there had been a scene describing what the two girls would get up to when they went out together.
You are one of the few who can develop a story line and continue it. Please continue this story.
Granted, the characters could have been developed a little more; but that would probably have made the story too long.
I do think the seduction could have been drawn out a little more, subtly.
As it happens, this story hit one of my buttons so I really did enjoy it.
Shame you didn't continue this hot story. Really fun if daughter could have been included. But alas, I think that little minx Mary would have made him miserable in the long run, she's way to smart and head strong.
Really a fun read. Thank you!
This story could have been continued. Then again it did reach a point where the future for this couple was obvious.
One should NEVER use petroleum jelly as a personal lubricant lubricant. Ah bee ya da bee ya da bee ya.........that's all folks!!!
Regards,
Paul