All Comments on 'The Honeymoon'

Can you believe it.

If she's an "international star" that means what she's doing is very, very open. All he has to do is direct her parents to this, all he has to do is send them a picture of her, and it's ample evidence it was a set-up, that it was all bullshit.

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Are we to expect she never has contact with her parents ever again, that they never find out she's married to a woman, that the woman just happens to be the very same one in the pictures? I don't care how much they hate him, they'd have to be insane to not realize the pictures where a set-up.

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Yeah, it's a stor, but it's a stupid one.

straight male over 18 from Australia??? seriously, I was laughing AT YOU when I read this complete garbage.

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I only gave it 3* because so far it is silly & full of holes. Hubby can easily show her parents the truth pointing to the websites, how she looks now, & his contact with Heidelberg police. At the end, he was "taken away". That said, these are bad ppl & need to be taken down. Is our hero up to it? Or does he succomb too? Surely, we need to get more. There could be the makings of a good story here. Ken

The story needs closure. As it stands, there isn't a viable ending.

And not much more.

You sure do have a sick side don't you.

very few people are as sick as the one he knew as his wife

No need for a squeal when all you have here is crap!

Very sick, rather twisted and perverted in fact. The only thing that could possibly save this horrible thing would be for the husband to have shown some sense and contacted the police and have them bust the perverts as they tried to escort him out.

a story , even one as sick as this, deserves a finish. how about it? is this the way you want to be known? able to start a story, but not smart enough to finish it?

NO VOTING

i reckon someone could write a really good scorched earth ending to this.

Your lead male characters are wimpier than those that Edrider72 writes about. And that's bad. Stop writing - you can't.

NONE OF YOUR STORIES HAVE ANY REDEEMING QUALITIES.....NONE WHAT SO EVER!!!!

Real good at that shit, europeans in general......They'll cry like babies when the ragheads get a majority........GOOD

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That's where he pulls out his gun and puts a bullet between Gretchen's eyes. Clean THAT bitch!

You people who write stories like this are really freaking weird, like not trying to be rude or anything but seriously get help. LIKE SERIOUSLY! There’s honestly something not right with you. Something traumatized you into thinking things like this is “hot” “a fetish” or whatever and that’s not true. This is disgusting. Wish literotica would ban rape stories. It’s not a fetish, it’s literally illegal.. yet, they let all you weirdos get away with it for some reason.

If Pet can mow the yard, get me a beer on demand and likes football, I want one! Seriously, this writer has to be one of Literotica's 25 worst!