All Comments on 'Becky's Lips'

All you have done is given a taster, I believe you have more of this story in you.

GIVE IT TO ME. (I mean more of the story)

I'm sure you will keep us informed of further adventures keep on trucking ten bears 43

I very much enjoyed this short tale of sapphic discovery.

Thanks!

Great story only thing is that I thought that it was to short. I think that there is a good opportunity for more of the story. I am looking forward to reading the continuing story of these two women. There is so much more that you can tell us about what happened after Becky comes back to college. Thanks for starting a good story. As always. B C

Loved it!

I only use this word I invented as a kid when something is very special.....your story is very real as well as being arousing....the one request I have is that you please continue the story....perhaps to the point of a true relationship or the bringing in of other people ...... there are many branches on a tree.....you have a very interesting and sturdy trunk to build upon....please.....let there be more....you are an excellent writer.

Thank you for writing this amazing story!

Soooooo good!

L

I loved your writing. Thanks for sharing.

Loved your story but only wished it had continued with Linda and Becky getting together for the New Year. Lots could be written about their affair and maybe even having Becky control Linda over time. Could happen.

I really enjoyed this story, and would love to read more of it (hint, hint ;) )

When I saw the story I didn't have any idea that it would be like it was

I assumed that Linda would be the aggressive one and Becky would be like a innocent little virgin who gets seduced by her professor.

It threw me for a loop when I found out that it was quite the opposite.

Most stories of teachers and students are about the teacher seducing the student

I read the whole story and thought that it was good.

I hope that you might consider writing another chapter about them in the next semester

That was hot as fuck. Teacher/student liaisons are so naughty.

Please continue to write you are becoming my new favorite author... the one I go to for cum.

Loved your story and the way you built it, not too faster slow. You developed a very caring story between the two then nice steamy sex. Would be nice to read more chapters involving these two hotties.

Reading this story was a delightful experience. Conversations were realistic, depicted contours of human personalities softly, developed the relationship with care, and progressed the plot gently. An amazing story. Thank you.

I got a tender, warm feeling inside. This story is more erotic than pornography. Beautiful descriptions of lips and hugs are very bright.

Beautiful story - totally loved it.

This has always been a fantasy of mine. I wish the story could continue since Becky is taking Linda's class again.

Nice story and very hot and inspiring

But I wish there were more of a continuation in their story

A lot of Milfs and Gilfs will have to catch up with the younger babes who are coming out by the thousands who are experiencing the ultimate pleasures at a very young age. Better wake up men and start being real men because a woman's orgasm is the ultimate ecstasy in a relationship because you are not a ladies man anymore if you ever thought you were.

Touching and effective in a very simple way.

Beautiful story. Wish I had had a professor like her! Or a friend like Becky lol maybe I do and I just don’t know it haha thx for sharing x

Sweet. Simple and sweet.

Im'nna say this is a great story! I like how it has a plot, it was written well, not like some came out from a porn-with-a-silly-idk-how-to explain-but-cringe-y. It honestly heart touching and toe-curling at the same time lol.

Wow! I found this story so amazingly hot. I was 16 years-old and my body had developed quite early; when an older girl in High School sort of teased and excited me at a summer pool party sleep over.. Late in the evening she visited my sleeping bag on the floor, I willingly accepted her sensual advances. My needy young body quickly responded to her uninhibited attention, magical lips, and tongue. Gina awakened me, much like Becky awakened Linda. We shared a sensual Summer, prior to her going off to College back East. Ooohhh! Your story was so sweet. Beth, in Southern, CA. Please continue this story, maybe an empowered Linda begins to teach Becky what a worldly experienced woman can bring to the bed, so to speak. xxx ooo

Well written and very sexy and erotic.

Great story that has several tentacles for expansion into a very sexual series. Like having Linda fantasize about Becky or having Becky allure Linda into a sexual encounter where Becky takes charge and has Linda at her beck and call. Linda naked on her knees before Becky begging to lick her sweet young pussy. Make this into a multiple chapter extension for pure sex. Your stories are very well done and received.