All Comments on 'The Return Of The Bully Ch. 02'

once again wow! continue writing what a cliff hanger, but tables should turn for tom, so he can get back at them all using the amazonians and boss in the limmo :)

I thought the first chapter was hot, but this one was better.

It had every thing and more, every thing I could ask for.

And talk about a complete twist, what about the ending.

I hope these women turn Tom in to a hunk, so that he turns

things around back home.

The woman/woman, the man/woman, and the threesome,

just great Wonderer4, thank you.

And please, please add more.

In keeping with the rest of the story, the boss will be Tom's father.

PS Brilliant

this chapter is hotter, than first!

don't turn story over, don't make Tom alpha-male. he like to be shy voyeur geek and he should come back home to mommy!

it's nothing just sex

Please write another chapter.

I think i found my new favorite writer.

I agree with a earlier comment about let Tom come home to mommy.

I can't wait to read about what happens to Tom next.

Will he come more of a man, like Tom, a bully too.

Or when he does come home to mommy, will he be alone?

Where ever this writer takes us, I know it will be hot and worth

the wait.

So please Wonderer4 write more, more and more.

All most forgot it was posted November 27.

Thank you for the Thanksgiving gift Wonderer4.

A little sick of him being a pussy... Please either end the story or give tom some fucking balls

I half agree with the last comment.

Let his dad turn Tom around, more like Mike.

Maybe then change the name of the story to,

The Geek Comes Home.

Or.

The return of the Geek.

But please write more.

Please keep writing please!!!!!

I must agree 100 percent.

What, with the threesome and

that cliffhanger, who want not

want to read more.

How much more humiliation can Tom take?

And how much more lucky can the bully be.

And

And now, more people are entering the picture.

I love it, love it, love it.

Hi!

I am a deep lover of the fantasy erotica genre and my second passionate fetish love is the sexfight fetish across both the GG and BG genres . There is nothing more i love than reading a great sexfight story with great buildup apart from the sword and sorcery genre. I am writing an epic sorcery and sword epic fantasy which has a lot of BG, GG and GG & BG sexfights set in an entirely medieval fantasy setting. This one should have more sequels written . The MILF character is the sexiest in any story and she should have many more battles with many women and men in the future across ethnicities .Cheers