All Comments on 'Big Changes Ch. 01'

by sabredog1

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ham_sandwichham_sandwichover 9 years ago
D**n the nonnies!

Full speed ahead! Good story, especially considering it's your first. More, please!

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Could be good but.....

The idea of the story is great, but you need to make it grammatically correct in order to make it good. There is a real lack of punctuation, making it hard to identify when the characters are speaking.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Nice to see the amazon sex position!

More please.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
oh Hell yes!!! I am THERE ~

YES YES YES !!

mrwidehorizonsmrwidehorizonsalmost 9 years ago
Great start!

Hope to see more. Great writing!!

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