All Comments on 'A Picture – Worth A Thousand Words Pt. 02'

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Sid0604Sid0604over 9 years ago
A great story...

I thoroughly enjoyed reading this chapter. It's a great story. Thank you.

EgoTrixiEgoTrixiover 9 years ago
Well...giving it all a thorough and intensiv thought...

... all I can possibly come up with has already been said. I did miss a short notice at the end about what happened to the Ex...but that puts no strain on it whatsoever.

Thank you for a wonderful story (almost a tale)...5*

mcollectmcollectover 9 years ago
Well done

Liked your pacing and the whole story. Will be looking for more from you!

tazz317tazz317over 9 years ago
WHEN ONE SHOE DROPS

the other has to be installed together. TK U MLJ LV NV

connoisseur29connoisseur29over 9 years ago
****

Good story and writing. FYI, a campground without hookups is called dry camping. I do it all the time. Often no cell connection, no TV, no worries. Cheers!

rightbankrightbankover 9 years ago
as touching as the romance was this time around

it only served to point out how much he had neglected his relationship with Bev and the kids. Maybe, just maybe, . . . . if he had . . . . .

acupacupover 9 years ago
A good story

It's nice to see more and more writers telling stories where there is some decent sex instead if the wham bam fuck 'em up stories that only have a ghost of a plot.

And rightbank... while it does take two to make a marriage work, it still takes them BOTH to be willing to make it work. Spoken from experience.

Chief3BlanketChief3Blanketalmost 9 years ago
Overall

Between the two chapters a nice enjoyable story.

TossawayTossawayalmost 8 years ago
Your Wife is Right, Mushbug!

Thoroughly enjoyable story, since I have seen these kinds of situations, or variations of them. I too will be looking forward to more from you "Romantic" mind. 5* on both chapters. A little more sexual activity would also be appreciated, after all, it's why we are "Romantics"!

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

A very enjoyable story. Motor homes are very good and comfortable ways to travel. Thankfully we always stayed longer than intended and that made the trip even better for us. This story stoked my memories of some great times. Well written!

nixroxnixroxover 2 years ago

5 stars - I really like this story

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

The two-part Romance was of the highest quality. An author worth following.

oldtwitoldtwitabout 1 year ago

A nicely paced litter love story

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