All Comments on 'Invasion of the Pussy-Snatchers Act 01'

I really enjoyed your story. I look forward to the next part.

Great, well thought out erotic mind control story. Lots of time and effort in this one and it shows and pays off too. Nice.

I never understood what the end game in a Cthulhu/Eldritch story was. What happens as everybody falls under the spell. If the ed game is not bad why resist the change at all? Oh well, I guess thats for me to find out someother way. Thanks for this great story.

Please keep on. this is a wonderful work :)

Do you mind me asking when can we expect a next part?

Not at all, Anonymous! I spent the last month trying to wrap up my other series Prison Pet. Since that series is complete I should be able to focus on Act 2. It takes about a month for me to write these longer stories so be patient. I appreciate your interest!

What is happening to the men while the women are being taken over by the Hive? A stoyline where both sexes fall under the control of the Hive would be hot. Plenty of chances for someone to think that what was going on was only happening to one sex and then when they turn to get help from someone of the "safe" sex they find out they are mistaken. A male going to a male police officer to report the women's strange behavior and then ending up with the cop's dick up his ass is what I am thinking about. Then the two men go home to convert the first man's wife and possibly adult children or his neighbors.

I love lesbian seduction stories like these where some supernatural or sci-fi reason where heterosexual women become lesbians.

Can I also the progress of your next chapter? It's been 2 months now, though it's expected that wonderful gems like this story take time.

THIS IS WITHOUT A DOUBT THE HOTTEST BIT OF LITEROTICA I'VE EVER READ.

🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹 dozen roses and 5🌟's

Not sure why this is appealing. There’s not a dick in the whole story.

The Gay Male section is 👉 way

Referring to a black woman as a hood rat? Offensive and unoriginal. Stop playing into stereotypes just because it’s easy.