All Comments on 'Down'

It was neither clever or erotic. Nothing ever drew the reader into the story. I didn't care what happened to the cardboard characters as the writing wasn't interesting. Just plain awful.

Agree with previous poster. Nothing to like here. If I heard the "Word" I would get up and leave. Next day it's lawyer time. Give her the preliminary papers and tell her to move to the guest room. As you are now only a temporary guest from this day forward. Yuck!! Terrible story. 1 star

Gave up halfway thru the first page. I'd have helped her pack her suitcase at the first "down".

Way too often a husband wants to be submissive only in the bedroom, and can be uncaring and unthinking of how he treats his wife in other aspects of their life. He may even try to control things from a seemingly innocuous position when he is really trying to top from the bottom. The wife in this story learns how to be the loving caring dominant spouse and greatly improves their entire relationship into one of giving and sharing where he gets to submit as he loves and she only dominates when she really needs to. Ah Love...even if he has to miss the big game, afterall she IS most important.Laura Anne Lynn (I can only guess that the other comments came from ones afraid of missing the superbowl while cleaning the bathroom). Excellently written!

You did a great job of writing this story. The seduction scenarios were

deliciously erotic and entertaining. In fact I love everything you write.

So keep it coming! As to the other people who decide they didn't like this

story. If it didn't float your boat, why bother reading it?

karmadarma

how, pray tell, will anyone know before reading, if they like it or not?

having read it, I now know I didn't like it.

I loved this story. Seriously. I have read so many stories on this site and this one has to be my favorite. Thank you so much for writing it. I loved the way you perfectly captured the marriage dynamic, and the submission to her in ways that weren't necessarily in the bedroom, while keeping her a loving and caring wife who still thought about the man she loved. This wasn't abuse, it was a growing relationship and the story clearly showed it. Great job, and thank you for sharing. I wouldn't mind a sequel either

I think not .

She deludes herself . The cracks are evident .

This ' marriage ' is headed for the divorce courts .

Only a matter of time .

Nothing loving about her controlling emotional abuse of her husband.

There is a reason this writing is in the “Fetish” category because no “Loving Wife” would use blackmail to purposely humiliate and punish her husband! If I were him the only thing of hers that ever got attention would be her feet until a more equitable agreement was agreed on!

bullying, controlling nag. She just browbeats/blackmails her husband into submission. Most of your other stories appeal, this one just annoys me.