Erotic Couplings Story Comments

Exceptionally great story really enjoyed reading it and how Angels being the hot erotic wife

Nice story but too short!

Please continue with the present and past.

An excellent story could have been better with a third chapter....What happened next? FTDS

Loved it, thanks

U r a real foodie, miss

Excellent tale. You write very well and tell a good story. Five stars.

Great story, with all of the right elements in place -- short and sweet!

Good story, but it just got going and then stopped -- please finish it sometime!

Dang!! That was a damn good story. Really well done. Great characters and narration.

Interesting plot and ending... good story though 5 stars!!

Great chapter. Love the way you worked music into it. I didn't get as into their connection as I did the one between Dan and Zahra... but I'm pretty sure that's how you meant it to be. I hope Zahra finds her way back into this series, or at least a later story with Dan... I'm perfectly...

Certainly some wayward thinking to come up with this storyline and make it work out like you have. Excellent.

Much feels.

Glad it's acknowledge that the Coach is a sexual predator, and that (generally) the adults take the situation seriously. Always happy to see a story acknowledge the power differential and that the laws are there to protect the students (or minors) even if they want the sex.

Excellent

Nobody, nobody, is that fucking stupid

Fun story, definitely gonna continue.

Lots of quick changes, some suspension of disbelief required, but it's fun so who cares? :)

Sensuous and thrilling at the same time!

not sure where you will head from here but I am here for the ride. very good start

I think this is a very good first effort, and I really like that while the story involves control and surrender, it does not involve humiliation. Speaking as a former English teacher, I don't think you begin too many sentences with "I" given that you are writing in the first person....

Dark start but engaging. A bit if suspension of disbelief, but less than many stories. Just a crazy thing that can already see opens to a well laid setup.

Great opening chapter.

The imagery is masterful, as is the descriptiveness. I thoroughly enjoyed this excerpt.

Thank you!

Is Alia available for another fuck session. I want to destroy her anus.

Wrong story category

Nice twist!

I enjoyed your story.

Another story written by a dude that can't tell apart lesbian and bi? Just what internet needed.

Next time, try to at least keep both hands on the keyboard, and proofread it.

Erotic couplings, my ass, this belongs in gay male.

Bit wordy for me. Liked the "less graphic" discretion of the sex parts. I occasionally write (in my head) & find myself drifting into detail. Think "is this much required" & edit. Like yr style.

This story is building momentum nicely - extremely well written. I look forward to seeing how it evolves.

Great story well written

Simple, straight forward, and well done sex.

THANK YOU!!

Be Well and Happy,

Paul

this was outstanding. Glad I got to read page 5... Can't wait to read more of your stories.

it was amazing sex with Sarah, the younger one should have participated more, but I believe it's gonna be in next chapters ;)