Interracial Sex Story Comments

5/5/2024

Knowing we are all here for our quick and dirty and aware that no one reads my profile updates. I'm posting this in the comments section of each series ending. Overkill but hey, you know how Lulu do.

I submitted on 4/30/2024 but there was something funky going on and...

5/5/2024

& I am so so sorry that this submission was so short.

I submitted on 4/30/2024 but there was something funky going on and it wouldn't post so I had to take it down Lulu & Dax Ch. 2 and re-submit on today 5/5/2024. I'll give it a day or two and then if it's still not there...

5/5/2024

ok y'all, I submitted on 4/30/2024 but there was something funky going on so I had to take it down Lulu & Dax Ch. 2 and re-submit on today 5/5/2024. I'll give it a day or two and then if it's still not there I'll take it over to the patreon. patreon.com/Lulu770

In the...

Another lovely story, thank you for sharing it!

One small critique, I think you may have accidently put it in the wrong category! lol

Is it a "racist comment" if someone points out that this story features racist characters and dialogue? Perhaps you could be more explicit about that in the initial disclaimer so people not into that can bail quicker?

Or not. Your story, write it how you want.

Good story but a bit rushed towards the end.

You did a fabulous job. Very good story so far.

As a black Mississippi man who knows all about undercover southern belle sluts, I’m loving these stories.

Not bad. The usual tropes and cliches as expected. Going on to chapter 2.

Good story. Two observations: (1) Telling the reader what they said is not as good as actually having the dialogue. Example: "She leans forward and tells him how she got fucked" as opposed to "These three hot guys fucked me." (2) Switching between present and past tense is distracting.

I haven't commented through the parts of the story until now. My thought is for me it would of been added emotion if her new black boyfriend and his fiance had been intimately kissing, staring into each other eyes like real lovers, having more than sex but making love. I guess if...

Hi @Anonymous - many thanks for the feedback. The issue with writing something like that is that it limits the options for what you can do with the character down the track which can be somewhat of a waste of a good character that has been developed in detail. For Astrid, this wouldn't...

I enjoyed it a lot. Becoming a cuckold for me started during covid when Gayle and i stayed together at hers. At the start we spent a lot of time naked and having sex and going for exercise daily sometimes having risky outdoor sex as well. One time we were outdoors and having sex i...

Gotta finish how the weekend ends at the very least! Knock it out of the park soon!

Great story and arc thus far...

Outstanding story in BBC/White Wife genre... Nuances here are terrific including the erotic development the fetish inclusive of capitulation and domination... Part two flowed smoothly after "the kiss" as well...

This type scenario is more common these days than some seemingly on...

Pleeeeaaasssseeee give us chapter 5!!!!

One of the hottest stories I've ever read!!

Awesome story

Hello Steven and Phylissia,

I am not sure if you will ever read this but I feel compelled to leave this comment. Thank you for sharing your story with us. It touched me in so many ways. I cried so many times I lost track. I'm so sorry for all the pain you both endured. I believe...

PJX here,

Harry you're an amazing writer, read all of yours stories in a matter of few days just and i loved them they're all great, I love the way you built the plot and blend it with the Nordland setting makes your stories unique and not just a regular fuck story, After reading...

You can have a cheating story without the willing cuck shit. A dumbass naive husband losing his wife to an assertive predator, is a story that maintains some semblance of realism. The moment you have him reacting with a boner instead of anger/resentment/shock upon seeing them, you...

Oh man, so horny, I wish my wife would...

Great story, I‘m waiting for the next chapter

Please don’t let us wait too long

Definitely please continue the story.

I like it.

A fun story and a wonderful subtle

Definitely 5+ stars. Been looking all over Liteotica for you. please keep up the fantastic writing.

Helo

Doesn't it have a continuation?

I was curious about the direction the story was taking.

Laughable fantasy. But it’s good that people in prison have an outlet for their creativity.

Confused. The names kept changing, the details, the father so strange... the story is definitely not a good one.

I really enjoyed your story and I'd like to see a second part where you pick up at the end of cryptkeepers original story where she gets with Darryl. Or even just continuing on and she gets with Reggie. Keep writing, you're very good.

You write the same stories over and over.

Great story so far. I hope she takes Tony further into the sissy world now. And tease him into being a crossed dressed sissy cuckold.

This could have been in interracial or almost any other category. It was a very hot story, and would have been hot even with white guys

Enjoyed the plot and writing style. Look forward to more.