Mind Control Story Comments

What he needs to do is buy a very large house in an isolated area. All the women move in with him.

Aoife and Ethan have to be together

Excited to see where this goes.

Interesting! I wanna see where this goes

You'd probably want to look for my stories "What's on Your Mind" and "A Pretty Girl Is Like a Melody" for more on Veena and Professor Psyche - that's where they're introduced and where it's first hinted that they had a prior relationship.

I am glad that you are creating again and maintaining your high standards. I forgot how much our star-crossed lovers were similarly introverted.

Worth the wait, but please don’t take so long the next time!

very smooth!

how do i get a hold of those tapes and a friend to use me afterwards? great story

Good story....i just wonder how long to guy lasts...if hes drawing his balls w one three times a day, every day, and now he double the slaves.....i feel for the lucky fuck cause he'd be busting a nut 6x day....

Also wheres this lake at, I wanna go there and set up a booth, 😂 ...

Classic story, great one.

Hope this story continues. Great first chapter!

great story i would like to read stories about the other victims of this collars and implants.

Thank you very much for writing this story :-)

Gre. Enjoying the story and your writing. But please get an editor or a proofreader to correct the spelling errors.

Damn you get me emotional with your writing. It's good, keep it up.

Very solid chapter, sort of clearing the air/setting the stage. Looking forward to seeing where you go next. Thanks for writing.

Killing him during the attack wouldn't have been an issue. But first capturing him, then dragging him all the way over to Australia, and only afterwards killing him, that's something quite different.

The difference can be summed up as "killing versus murder".

And, to make it even...

Great story — more please!

The author has posted an additional 5 chapters at his patreon site back in March. Then he posted about being sick. I hope he's doing well and returns.

I really enjoyed this series. I initially did not like the Hypnos side story intertwined with the Alex story, but it worked out really well. I intend to read more from this author, and I really hope this story continues. I loved discovering this author in the massive Literotica...

Ohhh, this is SUCH a good start!

I really enjoy the story, but written in 2nd person is really throwing me off. The dialog is very confusing and I keep having to reread sentences. I strongly suggest you use either 1st or 3rd person in the future.

Love the two girls convincing themselves that they’ve always been attracted to each other and that their feelings are genuine. Also, Heather trying to argue she isn’t a lesbian and Shauna calling her a dyke. 🥵

Just want to start with saying I'm enjoying these stories, but I'ma bit confused. Ty takes Zoe to the hospital, asks to talk to Dr. Rai, and then the nurse and Dr. are furious with him. Does "talk" mean something different in Australia? Why is she mad at him?

Please continue this. Also, will Emma and Amelia ever see each other again? What does Emma's family think of all this?

Amazing story!

Yeah, don't worry; I've got a part two coming (it's 75 percent done -- should have it going up either tonight or tomorrow).

Marvelous. Needs more.

God this story is so great I keeping telling myself "Just one more chapter." I NEED to know what happens next ahhhhh it's so hot

Just discovered this story an am loving it!

God this story is fantastic I'm so glad there's so many chapters I get to read

Please continue. Great storyline

I really want to give this 5, BUT and it's a big but....

So, I've declined a vote.

A case of just like my own sex life; full of abstinence.

Ah the joys of mind control and a perfect town to use it to the fullest. A very well thought out and written story. I definitely look forward to reading more of your work. I appreciate your and your Muse's imagination and abilities to bring it to your story. Thank you for sharing...

Suggest doing a fresh edit of this excellent story. Slow it down. Add some detail.