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Tidbit treats for the fox.

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Top Shelf Series!

11/10!!!!!

It's not often that I have the strong urge to just delve into the next chapter, but not doing it now is really difficult. First the great fight scene, then the escape and chase with the Captain and that ending scene?

This might be a strong runner for the top 10 chapters this series...

this left me Realy hanging,can't wait for more.

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Uhmnnnn 'Dengar Labs' a Star Wars reference?

11/10!!!!!

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I like the passage:

"Holly was a vision, a small-scale Venus in fur"

Obvi a reference to the Roman goddess but with the 'in fur', I am reminded of the song by The Velvet Underground and Nico - 'Venus in Furs'.

11/10 Leather Whips!!!!!

The stories premise is good. It could lead to an interesting series. But, you need to either correct errors or get a proof reader. The main,’s name changed from Belle to Bella to Bell. You also have past and current tense in the same sentence which makes it hard to follow.

by far the best organized trap. Seperate, confuse and eliminate some of the mayor players, plus their protection and mobility. Great planned and executet while Mikey boy and sizequeen got played by their biggest weakness. Grand story and nothing less 5 stars appropiate. Thank you...

scruffnz's idea would be very bad for the shifters. The leadership would be wiped out and the surviving packs would have to find a new way of order.

Looks to me like there will ultimately be two beloveds and two mates in the foursome. Candice will end up as Jax's vampire's beloved....

Holy hell this is hot 🔥

I liked the dream world of Beth. And now I see her origin of Monster dildos. It must have been a dream turned into a nightmare when she met Oliver. I'm glad she's safe now, and that plot thread is done. On to the next story.

Must! Have! MORE!

Actually, Beth seems not to be the one doing anything. Stumbling there silly, doing nothing - only interest seems to get big fucked, like the sizequeen she is. No calling the cops if an man threatens her on her own ground and house. Not even try to slap him with anything. No, just...

great story and chapter, again. Not sure Mike will be able to see the trouble but he was'nt meant to be eather. His job is to be obvious lethargic avoiding to fight and sit it all out. Will the arachne be the breaking point in trust from Abella? Well' see. And well deserved for Lily...

been in love with this story since ch 1 <3

To the Garry yutz from down under the rock....

Maybe worry more about your own politics before you stick your penal colony nose in what is going on in America, the country that broke away from England, not the one that was England's human dumpster.

This was a great chapter, no reason...

Five stars (that are not easily given) for the chapter WITHOUT a mention of the Arizona.

Five stars (same) for the chapter even without the native Hawaiians.

Five stars JUST FOR mentioning either of those two entities...let alone BOTH.

These climax chapters are always interesting...

This is my second time reading up to this point. And, after twice through I have to say this is the best book ending so far (I'm not giving any spoilers).

Glad to see you back Spam Sam.

It looks like another poorly written outline of a story that might be interesting if you could be bothered to do a basic amount of research and world biulding.

Will given you a hint make the characters interesting, their skin color is not interesting....

here lies mac-n-cheese, really? *LOL* nonsens, i say

I came from your post on the AH and I have to say, this is really good! Low votes dragging down scores can be super frustrating, but it's not really a reflection of the quality of your work so try not to stress it. This first chapter is well-written, engaging, and it's a great setup....

Fantastic.... Need more...

Fascinating!

You skillfully wove the pent-up and suppressed nature of Mike into the interactions he had with other women. The range of his preferences in human women was refreshing: tall, dark-hair, professionally direct, with ass vs young, blonde, labourer with tiddies.

Mike as...

I have used so many words to describe and compliment your story! Stories! New and better words are needed to pay respect to your work. While words escape me, my feelings do not. I want more. Happiness, while immersing myself in your latest episode, is but short lived. Whilst truly...

again Thank you for this wonderful daily escape into fantasy. Love your story and all the work involved. Still marveling about some humor like Beth like big.. something, about the banter between Tink & Kisa or your Hashtags. Hope you're well and again, nothing less than 5 Stars

5 stars. Btw you misses a really good pun. That's one way to ride the lightning. I have no regrets. Thank you for another great story.

Had no idea how attached I was to these characters until this chapter-75. I'm sitting in a restaurant crying my eyes out. You Annabelle are a TRUE talent. You did a difficult thing. Something every author does with much trepidation, much less a million words in, with an audience...

What an amazing chapter! I loved how you added and respected the crew of the USS Arizona! Can't wait for the last chapter of the book and the continuation of the series!!!!!!!

Love conquers all. Tears

I should’ve reread this long ago. Reading it before HFHM made me not understand some things. But still can’t say I’m sorry for that considering the lesbian sex between Dana and Lily has been WOW! If you’re not bisexual, you freaking well should be, Annabelle lol. Kinda hate the...

I sure hope the humans don't decide round 2 is a good idea with all the alpha, mates and betas in one house

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Top Shelf Phantasy!

11/10!!!!!

Only just found you, and so impressed just about to start book four. First 3 books in a week.

??? Like Peggy Lee's song 'Is That All There Is', where's the rest of the story? Sorry but this kind of a story only gets two stars at best. Almost a waste of time reading it because after all these years I'm guessing the author still hasn't found the muse for the story.

That was very well done, Annabelle.