Chain Story~ "Mirror Mirror"

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Chain Story~ (Mirror Mirror)

"Mirror Mirror" Ch 01 (The Mirror )
by My Erotic Tail


"Mirror Mirror" Ch 02 "Katlyn and Patrick"
by LadyShianne


Mirror Mirror Ch 03 "The Discovery"
by Elizabetht


Mirror Mirror Ch 04 "HoneyMooners"
by CrimsonMaiden



Thanks to each and every one of you...
this has been a great story and I am so very
pleased to write with such fantastic and witty
artist and writers as these...

They have made this tale what it is.~

If you want to add a chapter please let me know...

...............................Art...........................................



This is how it started...


Help, Help me somebody. I'm trapped in this, "dad-blasted Mirror." ......

...I must figure this out. Lets see I felt the pain in my body I turned and saw... the killer. I fell into the Mirror.

... I remember looking in the mirror and thinking.
"Mirror Mirror, on the wall," as I did when we were kids.
Then my soul fell into the Mirror as my body fell...

Now I hang here, bound in a world reflective of reality. My soul is trapped in this mystical antique Mirror.

I am Charles Falcon the third. Recently desceased or I should say murdered. I was in my mansion on Hickory lane when the ill fate befell me...

...Last thing I did was look into this mirror before my body collapsed on the floor. My life flashed before my eyes and then I was looking down at...my self.

.....trapped in this voodoo priestess's mirror in
some strange way.

.... I've got to relay who the murderer is
before they can kill again. Ive got to get
out of this mirror's hold on my soul.

... I will find a way to tell my tale and set things right.

The Mirror was brought in just the other day,
the new addition to the master collection
of antiquities .... In the bungelow they called,
"The Honeymoon suite."

......Now I hang here, bound in a world reflective
of reality. My soul is trapped in this mystical
antique Mirror.

.... I will find a way to tell my tale and set things right.

...There came a knock at the door.
...she crawled out of the bed...
...She pulled the sheet around her naked body...

"Who is it?" She yelled out while looking through the peep hole.

..................................."Mirror Mirror"................................

In progress~
...............................Continued.......................................

........."Mirror Mirror".........


Chapter schedule:
(THIS IS THE SCHEDULE TO GO BY)
You may submitt at any time, this is just a guide

My Erotic Tail ...~(Chapter one)
....."The Mirror"
posted

Lady*Shianne~ (Chapter two)
......"Kaitlyn & Patrick" ...
posted


Elizabetht~ (Chapter Three)
...........submission date 4/04/04
posted

Crimson Maiden ~(Chapter Four)
posted4/17/04

Elizabetht~ (Chapter five)

jthserra ...Jim: ) (chapter six)
............Submision Date 4/25/04

Joseki ko ~(chapter seven)
.............Submission Date 5/01/04

Tatelou ~(Chapter eight)
............Submission Date 5/08/04

My Erotic Tail (Chapter Nine.... (perhaps? Last Chapter)
............Submission Date 5/8/04
Submission date 5/5/04






The possibilities are enormous...
Be creative and witty...of course erotic.

(Ideas :
The tangled web of Murder....

The mirrors history...and magic ways and how it
became magical...

Charles's past and delima..family ....love...dream?
murder...(I can adjust the ending if you want to write
the who done it.)

Or offer an opening into the other side of the mirror...
or description on the other realm....reflective world.

You can create a chapter were the magic
of the mirror creates a wild dream...
or time warp...or flash back in time...

A chapter... watching either ..)
honey mooners / lovers rent the room for a weekend.
Frat party or bacheloret party...weekend bash.
another murder in the room of the "Honeymooners suite"
Man rents room and employees a hooker or secretary.

The last chapter I will write...unless some one
gets with me and wants to do the final who
done it and how...

As you see you can get creative. AND an oppertunity
to write several chapters. smiles...The key will be to write
off what is already written. So collaberation is helpfull.

If you have a question..or ideas...
(Or you are interested in writing a chapter.)....
well heck..PM me..or post....he he

...smiles...(~.*)




I am posting appropriately for a chain story
Chain Story Guidelines
 
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Chapter 2 ~ Kaitlyn & Patrick

The young woman hesitated with her hand on the doorknob, seeming to realize she was in dishabille. "Just a moment." She said as she hurried to the closet. Pulling out the robe provided by the resort, she replaced the sheet with it. The silken fabric seemed to swallow her small, yet curvaceous frame.

Glancing in the mirror, seeming to look right into me, she murmured, "Mirror Mirror, I want his love." She smoothed her flaming red hair before heading to the door.

Unlatching the door, she slowly opened it to admit a tall dark haired man dressed in a business suit and carrying a briefcase. In his other hand, he held some official looking papers, which he was perusing as he stepped into the room. "Order some coffee, would you, Kaitlyn? It's going to be a long evening." He said without looking at her.

From my vantage point, being an observer, a voyeur, I guess, I could see the way she looked at him. She looked at him with a deep yearning. An unfulfilled hunger. She was in love with the man and he had no idea. The poor girl.

The man took a seat at the table while the young woman went to the phone and called room service. I heard her also order food, probably realizing it would be a while before she got to eat again.

"Sorry the rooms got messed up, Kaitlyn, but I'm glad they could get you into one. Even if it is the Honeymooner's Suite." He chuckled.

Kaitlyn smiled. "It's all right, Mr. Jamison. It's actually a beautiful suite. I don't know how my name got off the reservations. I'm the one who booked our rooms." Moving to the closet, she pulled out her attache case and carried it over to the table.

Look up, I screamed to myself. Look at the beautiful woman before you! Open your eyes, man!

Finally, oh, finally, Mr. Jamison looked up from his papers. His eyes traveled up the silk robe, over her curves, her slightly heaving breasts, up to her young beautiful face, green eyes, and long red hair that flowed down to her hips. "Kaitlyn?" he rasped.

"Yes, sir?" she replied huskily.

"Did I um...interrupt you? You're not dressed."

Yes, you buffoon, I yelled inside the mirror, inside my hell, You interrupted her. She had been lying on the bed, rubbing her hands over her voluptuous body, probably thinking of you, you blind idiot!

"No, sir. It's all right. But, maybe I should get dressed." She moved to go do that when he caught her hand.

"It's all right. If you're comfortable in that, it's all right with me."

Kaitlyn nodded shyly.

A knock sounded at the door. "Room Service, Miss Allen." A voice said from the other side.

Kaitlyn opened the door for the young man. "Place it on the table, please."

Mr. Jamison tipped the young man and waited until he'd left before speaking. He smiled. "Food, Kaitlyn?"

Kaitlyn blushed. "I knew if we didn't get food now, you'd let us both starve."

He chuckled. "You know me so well."

"Well, I have been your secretary..or should I say Personal Assistant...for the past three years." She defended herself as she poured his coffee, adding milk and sugar.

"Has it been that long? Did you know you've stuck with me longer than any other P.A. since I started this company twenty years ago?" he said curiously as he took the cup from her. "And you're the only one who can fix my coffee just the way I like it."

Kaitlyn served him one of the sandwiches then settled in the chair to eat hers. As they ate, I saw him watching her. The look in his eyes showed a newly awakened interest in her as a woman. "How old are you now, Kaitlyn?"

"Twenty-one."

"So young. I'm forty-two." He seemed to be gauging her reaction. Interesting, I chuckled to myself.

"That's not old. Look at all you've accomplished in your life, Mr. Jamison. You're a wonderful man. Handsome, successful, and nice. What more could anyone want?" Kaitlyn blushed furiously.

Mr. Jamison smiled, his blue eyes sparkling. "Thank you."

Kaitlyn stood up, leaning over the table to clean away the dishes. Her robe gaped open, her wonderful breasts showing. Mr. Jamison's eyes greedily took in the view as he groaned. Kaitlyn's eyes jerked to his, a blush staining her cheeks again, but she didn't raise up. "Mr. Jamison..." she whispered.

"Patrick. Call me Patrick." His hand reached out and cupped her face. "God, you're beautiful, Kaitlyn." His hand drew her closer to him until she was sitting on his lap, her robe parting to reveal her legs. "Say my name."

"Patrick." She whispered. He placed her arms around his neck and touched his mouth to hers.

I watched, silently cheering, as the kisses grew hotter, wetter... wilder. Patrick's hands roamed all over her body, sliding the silk fabric sensuously across her body. One hand slipped into the opening to touch her breasts. Kaitlyn gasped at the contact, her back arching closer to his touch.

Patrick stood with her in his arms and placed her upon the bed. Untying the robe, he spread it open, framing her delicious body. As he looked down at her, he slowly took off his clothes.

Seemingly unable to stop herself, Kaitlyn ran her hands over her body, drawing a groan from Patrick and causing him to throw the rest of his clothes off. Starting with the bottom of her legs, he kissed his way up her body, pausing at the apex of her thighs to kiss, lick, and nip at her shaved mound.

Kaitlyn's body bowed, her fingernails digging into his shoulders, her legs wrapped around him, keeping his mouth on her. "Oh, Patrick, yes."

From the wall across from the four poster bed, I watched enviously as he pleasured her with his mouth. I could just imagine the taste of her juices. Patrick brought his fingers into play and kept tasting her until her body started to tense. She's about to cum, I thought excitedly. I had always loved watching a woman find pleasure. Watching that rapture come over her face. It was arguably the most beautiful thing in the world.

Patrick got more into it as she tensed even more. "That's it, baby. Cum for me. Let it go."

"Ohh..." Kaitlyn groaned as her body shuddered with the force of her orgasm. Her breathing shallow, her breasts heaving, she pulled him up her body. "Please..."

"Okay, baby. You're so sexy. I love your taste. When you came against my mouth...that turned me on even more. You're so beautiful." His mouth found her nipples, causing her to gasp.

Kaitlyn's hand slipped between their bodies, grasping his hard cock. He slowly moved up to kiss her. "You want that, baby?" he asked against her mouth.

Kaitlyn nodded, blushing.

Patrick looked at her curiously. "Are you okay, baby? Are you sure about this?"

Kaitlyn nodded again. "Yes, I'm sure. I want you. It's just that..."

"What, honey?" he asked as he gently brushed her hair back.

"Well, I've never done this before."

"Never? At all?"

She shook her head.

"Oh, baby, I'm honored. I'll be gentle." He kissed her neck, causing her to moan and arch against him.

Spreading her legs, she wrapped them around his waist. Her fingernails scratched his back as she pulled him even closer. "Please, Patrick...I want..."

"I know what you want, baby." He groaned as he rubbed his cock against her opening.

I had the perfect view as I saw his hardness slowly slide into her. Patrick paused at the barrier. "Okay, baby, this may hurt."

Kaitlyn nodded, bracing herself.

Patrick gently but firmly embedded himself to the hilt, as Kaitlyn gasped. Pausing, he allowed her to adjust to him before slowly moving his hips, this time causing her to gasp in pleasure. "That's it, baby. You feel so good. You're so tight."

Kaitlyn lifted her hips, meeting him thrust for thrust, her face mirroring her pleasure.

Patrick increased his motions, causing her to moan loudly. He nibbled on her neck making her writhe under him. "Oh, yes, Patrick, that's it..."

Patrick's movements increased again, knowing she was close again.

I watched avidly as the pleasure came across her face again. Her body tensed...her neck arched...her nails scored his back...a scream came from her throat...Her orgasm caused Patrick to tense, a sheen of sweat on his body as he found his own release. "Oh, yeah, baby."

After relaxing a few moments, Patrick rolled to her side and kissed her tenderly. "That was wonderful, Kaitlyn. The best. Truly amazing."

Kaitlyn blushed. "It was beautiful, Patrick."

"Are you all right with us starting a relationship?"

"I'd love it." She answered.

In my own hell, I cheered for them. There really could be a happy ending in this world. I had thought I had found that when I was alive...I had been married...in love with my wife...totally happy until the night I was betrayed by the one person in the world I thought would never hurt me...

Kaitlyn and Patrick had a chance and I prayed they knew how rare and special it was. I had taken it for granted. I let it slip through my fingers by ignoring the warnings...

Now, I am in my hell....trying to find a way out...


~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~Continued~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
 
My Erotic Tail said:
Chain Story~

"Mirror Mirror"...


If you have a question..or ideas...
(Or you are interested in writing a chapter.)....
well heck..PM me..or post....he he

...smiles...(~.*)

If you want I'll send the first chapter (BASIC) to you and
you can see how this will start out...

Interested?
...................................................................................

Yep, I'm interested!

It's a really cool idea, with interesting possibilities.

I do have an idea, but as it's just forming in my mind, I don't want to say too much, yet. I'll just say it has to do with vampiric ways. :devil:

Add me to the list, Erotic Tail. :)

I love your premise for your story, btw, I'd like to see the first chapter. PM me with it?

Lou :rose:
 
"Miror Mirror, on the wall..."

.........."Mirror Mirror, on the Wall...".........

Submission dates and deadlines.


Wonderfull Lady*Shianne~

smiles at Elizabetht~

Crimson Maiden's in...grin

Welcome aboard Tatelou~

current chapters scheduled:
(This is not final...it is a guideline)

My Erotic Tail (Chapter one)
....."The Mirror" submission date 3/28/04

Lady*Shianne (Chapter two)
......"Kaitlyn & Patrick" .....submission date 3/28/04

Elizabetht (Chapter three)
...........submission date 4/04/04

Crimson Maiden (Chapter Four)
............submission date 4/11/04

Tatelou (Chapter five)
............Submission Date 4/18/04


My Erotic Tail (Last Chapter)
 
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This looks very interesting. Great idea for a chain story.

I'd like to try my hand at it if that's ok.
 
You betcha I am in. Woohooo bring on the chain stories.

Hugs...
 
"Mirror Mirror, on the wall..."

Ok Elizabetht~ and Crimson Maiden~
Gotcha down...

Shianne ...Nice..thank you

tatelou...welcome.

The Dream Team may grow but I
set a guideline for submission dates.
Any questions get with me or post them.
The submission dates may not take that long
but they are one week apart in case some
one needs the time.
 
I'd like to give it a try...

I guess, I read what you all lead with and then carry the story along?



jim : )
 
Good evening,
If you don't mind I'd like to participate as well. Like Jim I'd like to see how you guy's start and go from there.

Thanks -- Jo
 
Re: "Miror Mirror, on the wall..."

My Erotic Tail said:
.........."Mirror Mirror, on the Wall...".........

Submission dates and deadlines.

Wonderfull Lady*Shianne~

smiles at Elizabetht~

Crimson Maiden's in...grin

Welcome aboard Tatelou~

welcome~ jthserra and Joseki Ko

current chapters scheduled:
(This is not final...it is a guideline)
The final and set guideline will be posted sunday 3/28/04

My Erotic Tail (Chapter one)
....."The Mirror" submission date 3/28/04
...................(completed)......................


Lady*Shianne (Chapter two)
......"Kaitlyn & Patrick" ..submission date 3/28/04
.....................(completed)......................


Elizabetht (Chapter three)
...........submission date 4/04/04

Crimson Maiden (Chapter Four)
............submission date 4/11/04

Tatelou (Chapter five)
............Submission Date 4/18/04

jhtserra (chapter six)
.............................................

Joseki Ko (chapter seven)
...............................................


My Erotic Tail (Last Chapter conclusion)

( Chapters ONE AND TWO are done
and can be sent to you.)
 
Schedule:

My Erotic Tail said:
.........."Mirror Mirror, on the Wall...".........


Chapter schedule:
(THIS IS THE SCHEDULE TO GO BY)
You may submitt at any time, this is just a guide

My Erotic Tail ...~(Chapter one)
....."The Mirror"
Submitted...3/28/04

Lady*Shianne~ (Chapter two)
......"Kaitlyn & Patrick" ...submitting 3/28/04
(complete)

Elizabetht~ (Chapter Three)
...........submission date 4/04/04

Crimson Maiden ~(Chapter Four)
............submission date 4/11/04

Tatelou ~(Chapter Five)
............Submission Date 4/18/04

jhserra ...Jim: ) (chapter Six)
............Submision Date 4/25/04

Joseki ko ~(chapter Seven)
.............Submission Date 5/01/04

My Erotic Tail (Chapter Eight.... Last Chapter)
............Submission Date 5/8/04
Submission date 5/5/04

Hope you enjoy writing this tantalizing tale ...
as much as I did. (~.*)
 
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The Mirror~ Chapter 01

Submitted Chapter 01...The Mirror~

I sent all of you a copy of it as I submitted it...
If you didn't let me know...smiles...
And away we go...

I did see that it is posted two ways on the thread...
"Mirror Mirror" Is the Chain Story Name.

Look forward to reading the Chapters as they unfold.
.....................(~.*) smiles.............................Art
 
UPDATE: "Miror Mirror"

UPDATE:

My Erotic Tail said:
.........."Mirror Mirror".........




Wonderfull Lady*Shianne~
Submitted Chapter 02

smiles at Elizabetht~

Crimson Maiden's in...grin

Welcome aboard Tatelou~

jim : )

Joseki ko~

current chapters scheduled:

My Erotic Tail (Chapter one)
....."The Mirror" submitted 3/28/04

LadyShianne (Chapter two)
......"Kaitlyn & Patrick" submitted 3/29/04

Elizabetht (Chapter three)
...........submission date 4/04/04

Crimson Maiden (Chapter Four)
............submission date 4/11/04

Tatelou (Chapter five)
............Submission Date 4/18/04

jthserra (Chapter six)
............Submission Date 4/25/04

Joseki ko (Chapter seven)
............Submission Date 5/02/04

My Erotic Tail (Chapter eight)
...........Submission Date 5/10/04


 
Mirror Mirror

Just an FYI:

I submitted Mirror Mirror Ch. 02 "Kaitlyn & Patrick" tonight (3-29-04).. It's "pending".. hopefully it'll be up soon...


:kiss: Shianne :kiss:
 
Re: Mirror Mirror

LadyShianne said:
Just an FYI:

I submitted Mirror Mirror Ch. 02 "Kaitlyn & Patrick" tonight (3-29-04).. It's "pending".. hopefully it'll be up soon...


:kiss: Shianne :kiss:

WOO HOO

And away we go...

E~
the ball rolls to you...



One ...Two...
..Mirror Mirror ...
start to grew.
 
Re: Chapter 02 posted~

Woohoooo.....

<curtseying> thank you...

Good luck to Elizabetht.... Can't wait!!!!!

:kiss: Shianne :kiss:

My Erotic Tail said:
Round of applaud for ladyShiannes...
"Mirror Mirror" CH 02 Kaitlyn and Patrick"
Way to go sweetie...wonderful...simply wonderful

Posted and now showing...woohoo...

Ball rolls into Elizabetht's court...he he he

"Anticipation"
 
E~

Wow Elizabetht~

read your intro...witty and intriguing...
I really like were your going with this tale.
"ANTICIPATION" HEHEHEHE (~_*)
 
Re: Chapter 03~

My Erotic Tail said:

The ball rolls into CrimsonMaidens court...hehehe

Working on it... sorry I got a little behind... had to get my Earth Day story finished.

This one should be done late tonight/early tomorrow.
 
Way to go CM~
Chapter 04 is now added...

I want to thank each of you for your wonderful
addition to this tale...you all have made it better
than I ever expected...smiles...

the ball rolls to Tatelou~

My Erotic Tail said:
Chain Story~ (Mirror Mirror)

"Mirror Mirror" Ch 01 (The Mirror )
by My Erotic Tail


"Mirror Mirror" Ch 02 "Katlyn and Patrick"
by LadyShianne


Mirror Mirror Ch 03 "The Discovery"
by Elizabetht


Mirror Mirror Ch 04 "HoneyMooners"
by CrimsonMaiden



Thanks to each and every one of you...
this has been a great story and I am so very
pleased to write with such fantastic and witty
artist and writers as these...

They have made this tale what it is.~

If you want to add a chapter please let me know...

...............................Art...........................................



In progress~
...............................Continued.......................................

........."Mirror Mirror".........


Chapter schedule:
(THIS IS THE SCHEDULE TO GO BY)
You may submitt at any time, this is just a guide

My Erotic Tail ...~(Chapter one)
....."The Mirror"
posted

Lady*Shianne~ (Chapter two)
......"Kaitlyn & Patrick" ...
posted


Elizabetht~ (Chapter Three)
...........submission date 4/04/04
posted

Crimson Maiden ~(Chapter Four)
posted4/17/04

Tatelou ~(Chapter Five)
............Submission Date 4/18/04

jthserra ...Jim: ) (chapter Six)
............Submision Date 4/25/04

Joseki ko ~(chapter Seven)
.............Submission Date 5/01/04

My Erotic Tail (Chapter Eight.... Last Chapter)
............Submission Date 5/8/04
Submission date 5/5/04
 
Changes~

Ok balls rolling to E~...she is taking tate's place

Tatelou~ would like a bit more time and now
the chapters will bring E~ to be chapter 05...

Ready E~???...smile...

jim is still chapter 06~

Jo~ get ready hehehehe!!!!

tatelou will be chapter 08


and any body wanting to do another chapter?
let me know.
 
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