dirtylover
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I've just noticed this in the published authors thread:
"I swore not to harm you." He grinned. "I never said I wouldn't seduce you."
In a thread in the Eds Forum, Dr M asks
I want to see if I can get this straight.
A. “He acted alone,” he said. “But someone helped him escape.”
but
B. “He acted alone.” He turned to the butler accusingly, “but someone helped him escape.”
or
C. “He acted alone.” He turned to the butler accusingly. “But someone helped him escape.”
or what? What combination of commas, periods, and capitalization is correct?
---dr.M.
Now, I assumed Snooper was right with his answer:
“He acted alone,” he said, “but someone helped him escape.”
But now I'm not so sure. Does anybody here know if there's an adehered to convention, or can full-stops replace commas? Is it more of a stylistic choice? I notice drM often uses full-stops, and his writing is very good.
Thinking about changing my style, dl.
"I swore not to harm you." He grinned. "I never said I wouldn't seduce you."
In a thread in the Eds Forum, Dr M asks
I want to see if I can get this straight.
A. “He acted alone,” he said. “But someone helped him escape.”
but
B. “He acted alone.” He turned to the butler accusingly, “but someone helped him escape.”
or
C. “He acted alone.” He turned to the butler accusingly. “But someone helped him escape.”
or what? What combination of commas, periods, and capitalization is correct?
---dr.M.
Now, I assumed Snooper was right with his answer:
“He acted alone,” he said, “but someone helped him escape.”
But now I'm not so sure. Does anybody here know if there's an adehered to convention, or can full-stops replace commas? Is it more of a stylistic choice? I notice drM often uses full-stops, and his writing is very good.
Thinking about changing my style, dl.