- Non-Erotic Poetry
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Click hereHe was
a precocious child
"Daddy, count the stars!"
- COMMENTS
Amyfriendabout 17 years agoand I could picture an unusually advanced child being so interested. Nicely done.
duddle146over 17 years agoA child's wonderment ~ A child's plaintive request. Lovely in its simplicity.
LeBrozover 17 years agoFrom such precocious ones
Come feelings of prideful wonderment
And uncontrollable rage...
Bill Dadaover 18 years agoI have no idea what 'directional frosting' is but I like it. I like it almost as much as I like your poem.
Anonymousalmost 19 years agoI do not know what 'directional frosting' is ,but I liked the little poem.
RhymeFairyalmost 19 years agoI loved this lil poem. Cute an funny.
So like a child huh.
Might be short, but your imagery is Super.
I can feel myself outside-so very dark- lookin into the childs eyes and seeing that lil *shine*
Wonderful poem~~!!
perksalmost 20 years agoThis poem shows how a title can be directional frosting.
