All Comments on 'A Scientist's Mourning'

And I found the poem most intriguing. Two small "wonderings"... first, there seemed to be something missing in line three. The second wondering is about line breaks. (Consider playing with them a bit... letting you drop a couple of unnecessary words). To me, there are some phrases and images that cry out to be on their own.

a very nice subtle dig at all of us who try to take a poem apart piece by piece... I am very guilty of this myself so I shall simply say this a great poem that stands on its own. Very well done!

It has been so quantified, analyzed, digitized that now life has no feeling.

Pining for the days when things were of a simpler nature. When there was still mystery and inspiration to be found in nature's wonders.