- Non-Erotic Poetry
- Angeline Is Joy
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Click hereNote: This double acrostic poem celebrates the amazing Angeline, who is often imitated but never equalled. She is, simply put, a wonder, and I never get tired contemplating her genius!
Angeline is joy, the dulcet eternal ariA
Naiad of enchanting waters, child of suN
Generous, Loving, Responsible, and younG
Elevated by sheer joy, love and elegancE
Living a life so thoughtful and tranquiL
Imaginative, richer yet in my mind's "I"
Never has there been a poet like heaveN
Eternally assured a place on the thronE
Is she a Goddess? Mrs. Pele from HawaiI?
Stunning in her poetic imagery- no lesS!
Jubilant, the piquant song of a blue "J"
Open to the entire world, so free to gO
Yearning to share what she needs to saY!
- COMMENTS
Amyfriendalmost 17 years agothat it took splashes of brilliance to complete this poem. Sack you're a damn Genius.
duddle146over 17 years agoAfter reading this poem one feels as if he has been allowed into a secret little fan club devoted to a very special person ~ Angeline. How good and pleasant it is to see such appreciation for another.
Honey123almost 19 years agoI really enjoyed reading this poem. What a great dedication to someone you truly care about..
~Honey
Anonymousalmost 19 years agoMine was the first one--I don't know why it didn't show. And, yes, I was sort of embarrassed, Sack, by the tribute. :)
On the other hand, anything *I* can do to make someone else write a double acrostic is pretty cool. To me it's what poetry is about. Judo taught me to write them and it appears I've taught you, so the circle is complete.
Now you have to teach someone. xo, Ange
sackalmost 19 years agoAuthorNo need to pander, 12/1, I don't need anything from Angeline, and in return, she doesn't owe me anything. Why do you insist on putting an ulterior motive "spin" on some of my tribute pieces?
The bold beginning and end letters of each line simply outline the double acrostic, it has nothing to do with point making or chest thumping. I thought that was obvious...
twelveoonealmost 19 years agosack,
if you are going to pander, do it a little less obliviously,
No caps, and bolds on the ends. Let the reader discover.
Some of these lines, how do I say? Suck.
"Imaginative, richer yet in my mind's "I"" a cliche compounded by a bad pun, and of course the bold "I" drawing attension to it. Always let the reader discover your bad puns.
On the other hand:
"Angeline is joy, the dulcet eternal ariA
Naiad of enchanting waters, child of suN"
is not a bad opening, first line is quite nice, second while seeming a bit dated, fits rather well with the first.
Anonymousalmost 19 years agoNice Sack! Creative and wonderful! Welcome back have missed you!
du lac~
RhymeFairyalmost 19 years agoYa gotta love this poem~!!
I love the way you set it up.
Your wording is pure *poetry*..
Great poem Sack.
I think she is gonna love this too.
Wonderfully said~!
dcpoet44almost 19 years agoto another writer. wonderful imagery and the setup i've never seen before adds to its lustre. superbly done sack......don
