All Comments on 'Another Secret Trip'

been writing some great stuff lately

I love this one especially the last 2 stanzas

Thank you

...lovely. I can't recall one of yours I like more!

lovely images and sentiments

to what is a woman's poem with pansies, pentunias (sic), and

pink and tangerine waves, that being said:

these are powerful lines:

pain was much more permanent

than pleasantries

the unbearable is dissolved

(that I wish I would have writtten)

A nice balance of pain and romantic sweetness,

With the romance winning out by the sea {naturally}

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The carefree feel of the ocean breeze ~ disolves all difficulties.