All Comments on 'At the Window'

by Remec

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Syndra LynnSyndra Lynnover 19 years ago
Very good!

Mentioned in today's poetry review

LadyJeanneLadyJeanneabout 19 years ago
You have

an exceptionally expressive way with words! You've managed to take the mundane detail of an ordinary winter's chill and turn it into a lyrical glory. Terrific poem - loved this! Thank you. LJ

LeBrozLeBrozover 17 years ago
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That last word brought this piece up to another level. It's no longer just a wonderfully descriptive piece about winter, but has a very human feel to which most can quickly relate {though I'd most prefer some Suisse Mocha}.

LeBrozLeBrozover 17 years ago
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This poem was mentioned in the Archival Review thread, in a picking through Lit's archive of over 34,000 poems.

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duddle146duddle146over 17 years ago
Dayscene

First a Snowball fight ~ then inside for a hot cup of cocoa.

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