All Comments on 'Battle Cry'

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tazz317tazz317about 12 years ago
THOUGH THE COMBAT WAS WORTHY

the overall task was not. TK U MLJ LV NV

LeBrozLeBrozover 17 years ago
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This poem was mentioned in the Archival Review thread, in a picking through Lit's archive of over 34,000 poems.

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duddle146duddle146over 17 years ago
enduring.

Grim rendering ~ with outstanding metaphors.

LeBrozLeBrozover 17 years ago
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Excellent metaphorical piece with such powerfully vivid imagery.

lostandfounderlostandfounderover 19 years ago
Great work...

a wonderful poem about courage and change. Inspirational without being sappy. Very good!

doormousedoormouseover 19 years ago
Hmm

I loved this :

"Not a bloody battle.

Tears fall along with the enemy.

Dragons are slayed without swords;

unrest is overcome."

Too many powerful stanzas to choose from. That one stood out. ;-)

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