All Comments on 'Beef Injection'

Great winding, pondering poem if a bit word heavy.

Something different from this poet.

A "cute" read,

but not up to his better writings.

Perhaps he was distracted

and limited by his subject or choice of form.

are you kidding me with this poem? I laughed, I cried, I had to give it a five because it mentions the word "duck". I'm biased what can I say? Okay, this poem starts out like my worst nightmare and then by the end I realize that really nothing has changed, I was just fooled by big words and larger than life internal rhyme and imagery. And yet, I couldn't stop reading, didn't want to at all! It was fast, and bipolar, and god knows the mania in that is all kinds of fun. Go back on the meds dear, but if you decide not to, you can send your whacky brain tirades to me. I was raised on that rollercoaster. It's smart, it's crazy, and if it didn't have the raunchy bawdy sex thrown in, I would have thought it was a conversation with my mother. It's an electrode to the balls of the poetry forum. *laughing*

with a side of rarebit. TK U MLJ LV NV