All Comments on 'Corridor'

Sparse wording reinforces the bleakness of the setting. Very well done.

Glad to see you decided to start submitting here on Lit.

Enjoyed this poem, though I think there were a couple minor editing issues you might not have considered - a couple places where your grammar suffered a bit, a couple redundancies. However! It's a strong poem, bleak and ascetic in a way that emphasizes the tone of the poem.

Good job, hope to see more of your stuff, chief.

~D.A.

By any other name, incarceration's bleak.