All Comments on 'Crumbs'

poem in my opinion. Strong emotions come through. Nice work irish!

L&F is right on with his comment.

In this strange day of happenstance, as I write this comment, a squirrel has rooted through the compost pile outside and is busily devouring the butt-end of a loaf of bread. Now, I'm wondering about the vultures!!!

and detached.

Much strength and resolve here.

: )

You are finding your voice.

keep it up

Very compelling imagery, ICM.

i agree with Tath / your poetry is getting stronger, finding a voice /

especially the last line "and compete for this worthless fodder." Thank you!

Another excellent piece from that Poetry Class of '04.

This poem was mentioned in the Archival Review thread, in a picking through Lit's archive of over 35,000 poems.

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