All Comments on 'Dusk Song'

by AudreyHepburn

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lorencinolorencinoover 14 years ago
One of the Best

<br>I don't normally find myself liking poems on this topic. They are usually emotional and artless in their excessive outpouring of grief. I nearly didn't read this poem. <br><br>

Fortunately I discovered a stunningly beautiful and insightful exploration of a soul that had lived through a deep and seemingly abiding love. <br><br>

Congratulations on a carefully measured and very effective poem. The poem is the work of a master; the dedication at the end is that of a very real human being.<br><br>

Maria2394Maria2394over 14 years ago
hmmm

I would hardly call this a poem written by a "master.' The limitless "it's" ruined it for me. A real talent would have found a way to write, to express without using a word from the poor man's dictionary... good effort, though

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
very touching and melancholic ..

A very touching an melancholic poem, but beautiful. Hope you are fine...

We're Love ourselves like a spread but somehow connected cloud of golden stardust...

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