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Click hereThanks to the god that left her
The beast within
Bound here to the altar standing
Peace within
The Card is Tranquility, Balance and Stillness
Legs spread like pillars of Heaven, exquisite
Arms raised like holders of torches extended
She is calm now, has the moon light upon her
Let us begin
I call her Selene. I call her Luna
Lips touch her chin
I see her haloed in symmetry perfect
Lash touch her skin
I see her robes whipping quickly all from her
I sense her skin calling hungry for knowledge
I feel her pull now with famished excitement
Give to the lash what the lash wants to take I am
Eater of sin
Holy is the energy, Holy the night
The sphere of perfection, the urge to bite
Pierce it with thumbs, pierce and produce
From the fruit of the pomegranate, pomegranate juice
Here in the hell we have set her
Secrets unsealed
Rage of our bodies have met her
She is revealed
Mouth now to mouth is an unending chasm
Fire in the blood and the milk and the plasm
Sensations meted in rictus and in spasm
The heart of the beast is the heart of orgasm
What was within
Released again
I am eater of sin
Eater of sin.
Unlike some of your other poems, this one has a fluid gracefulness that seems like it was effortless to write.I know better. Although EATER OF SIN has alot of action, it seems more thoughtful and reflective on your part. The dichotomy of words and ideas kept me going back and forth about who was really the eater of sin, who brought atonement to whom, was this a beautiful process (I looked up the word rictus!)did one have to get dirty in order to purify....etc. Leighlilly
I'm impressed at how you're able to convey such emotion in so few but perfect words.
I can't see what you were worried about ,this is fantastic!
I love the way you alternate the lines and rhyme, with words that are not all used up and cliche. I love the story you have told and the rhythm you gave this piece. and the repitition is not forced and very appropriate in this work. That is a difficult thing to do, but it works.
excellent music, for someone who misplaced his muse
enjoyed much-
julie
and just wow again this is fabulous writing sorry I am not brainy enough to say why it hits all the right notes I just know it does for me.