Enraptured

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Enraptured

Heady with the scent of you,

Your sweetness tingling the tip of my tongue

Nerves on fire, quivering

That slow rolling moan

Like thunder across the valley

And like the flash flood that follows

I languish in the ecstasy of your passion

Drinking from the fountain of your sensuality

I am Enraptured.

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NaturemithyaNaturemithyaabout 15 years ago
Sensual write

People can write books?

They can write pages?

or write words to describe the world?

But you are precise to the point and erotic for those who understand.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
The first of your's I've read...

This is pretty good. I'd like to see what you can do in a more narrative style so I'll check out some others.

Carrie

SweetDealSweetDealabout 18 years ago
So wonderful---

Passion magnified by love's power, an experience that should never be denied.

PatHous56PatHous56about 18 years ago
Sweet

The flavor and taste of shared ecstasy flowing from love. Patricia

My Erotic TrailMy Erotic Trailabout 18 years ago
enraptured

I enjoyed the spiral of words layed out in a very poetic way, thanks (~_~)

CaPic267CaPic267about 18 years ago
Sweet words

Of what can be, could've been, and will be, once more. Finding love's fires, keep them fanned and never let them go out. CP

Wanton VixxxenWanton Vixxxenabout 18 years ago
Like a waterfall...

your emotions spill over as true love onto the pages here for the last three days. Knowing you, My Man of Sand and Heart <smile>, there will be more of this gentle cascade for our eyes to gaze upon while drifting in the warm pool of today's beautiful words. Ahhh... but to float in love like this again!!!

Vixxx

LeBrozLeBrozabout 18 years ago
~~

Freely sharing love's grand delight

Enriches all who read these;

Let lesser fools prance and moan

While missing tenderness shared here.

AnnaVenus69AnnaVenus69about 18 years ago
Enchanted

My love, I bask in your warmth and the beauty of your words

What more can I say? "I smile and kiss you, unseen"

All my Love xxx Your Anna