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Click hereEnraptured
Heady with the scent of you,
Your sweetness tingling the tip of my tongue
Nerves on fire, quivering
That slow rolling moan
Like thunder across the valley
And like the flash flood that follows
I languish in the ecstasy of your passion
Drinking from the fountain of your sensuality
I am Enraptured.
People can write books?
They can write pages?
or write words to describe the world?
But you are precise to the point and erotic for those who understand.
This is pretty good. I'd like to see what you can do in a more narrative style so I'll check out some others.
Carrie
Passion magnified by love's power, an experience that should never be denied.
I enjoyed the spiral of words layed out in a very poetic way, thanks (~_~)
Of what can be, could've been, and will be, once more. Finding love's fires, keep them fanned and never let them go out. CP
your emotions spill over as true love onto the pages here for the last three days. Knowing you, My Man of Sand and Heart <smile>, there will be more of this gentle cascade for our eyes to gaze upon while drifting in the warm pool of today's beautiful words. Ahhh... but to float in love like this again!!!
Vixxx
Freely sharing love's grand delight
Enriches all who read these;
Let lesser fools prance and moan
While missing tenderness shared here.
My love, I bask in your warmth and the beauty of your words
What more can I say? "I smile and kiss you, unseen"
All my Love xxx Your Anna