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by jd4george

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TathagataTathagataover 19 years ago
Your poem

has been mentioned on the poetry review thread

DeepAsleepDeepAsleepover 19 years ago
Ah..

There's a sense of... eh.. Beneath the wheel?.. here that allows me to imagine a line stretching off into forever, crushed men under stone blocks, or cannonballs.

Is this a religious poem, or a war poem, or both? I couldn't pin it down, much as I like it.

LeBrozLeBrozabout 16 years ago
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This poem was mentioned in the Archival Review thread, in a picking through Lit's archive of over 38,500 poems.

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