- Erotic Poetry
- Goddess winter ‘84-’85
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And I stand behind you naked.
and I stand behind you weak.
I stand behind you impotent
and unable to speak.
Lady, you’re a goddess
and I’ll worship at your altar.
I’d try to walk beside you
but my steps would surely falter.
You’ve stripped me of my manhood
and taken all my pride.
To take you as a lover
a part of me has died.
- COMMENTS
fire_breezeover 16 years agoA beautiful poem - exquisite imagery and the rhythm is not only subtle but flows virtually flawlessly. Thank you.
jthserraover 18 years agothe alluring images of your other winter poem, I like what you've done. With subtle rhyme and easy flow in the lines the poem reads nicely, but most importantly, you have a strong finish here. Nice one.
jim : )
