by lostandfounder
Like the way you had to qualify the ending. Made it a fun read. Also, like the images you created and even the underlying sexual terms. OK, i like the whole poem. Now, that i know what i'm missing, i will have to tune into the Olympics. Nah, maybe i'll just read your poem again.
with a great ending. I enjoyed it and recommended it on the new poems thread.
I watch the gymnats with awe and envy. You expressed my sentiments very well...most of the time I look at how they move and wonder if their moves are just as graceful in the bedroom. :)
"I?m not gay, but...
...I mean however...
There?s some fine looking men."
I love this! What a fun ending
you write poetry don't you...
you are one smart-ass -sticking this in the erotic catagory- this is funny - stuffing all those Greek gods in there, nice lead to "and (of course) Pseudo-sexual dialog" pow - the ending, it took me a good two minutes to compose myself before I could write this and bulb it.