All Comments on 'Gymnast'

by lostandfounder

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irishcatsmeowirishcatsmeowover 19 years ago
I know, you are looking at them aesthetically...

Like the way you had to qualify the ending. Made it a fun read. Also, like the images you created and even the underlying sexual terms. OK, i like the whole poem. Now, that i know what i'm missing, i will have to tune into the Olympics. Nah, maybe i'll just read your poem again.

WickedEveWickedEveover 19 years ago
fun poem

with a great ending. I enjoyed it and recommended it on the new poems thread.

Miss OatlashMiss Oatlashover 19 years ago
Great!

I watch the gymnats with awe and envy. You expressed my sentiments very well...most of the time I look at how they move and wonder if their moves are just as graceful in the bedroom. :)

annaswirlsannaswirlsover 19 years ago
~

"I?m not gay, but...

...I mean however...

There?s some fine looking men."

I love this! What a fun ending

twelveoonetwelveooneover 19 years ago
I dunno

you write poetry don't you...

you are one smart-ass -sticking this in the erotic catagory- this is funny - stuffing all those Greek gods in there, nice lead to "and (of course) Pseudo-sexual dialog" pow - the ending, it took me a good two minutes to compose myself before I could write this and bulb it.

doormousedoormouseover 19 years ago
LOL!!

And Mmmmm yep... there ARE some mighty fine lookin' men ;-)

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