All Comments on 'In The Night Garden'

I don't think I've read your stuff before, but that was really beautiful!! ;-)

For your first posting here, this is wonderful. From the reference in the title to the tightness throughout, your voice comes through nicely.

Thank you.

As tender, threatening, and as beautiful as the roses.

Very sweet.. moving.. lots of emotions involved.. looking forward to many more sis.. *snerkles you*

Very nice and pointed... love the rose...

Clear voice expressing strong, full, honest thoughts.

Lovely.

Each line builds well on the previous. The only line I didn't get,

Ebb and flow, watered by tears

Do vampires experience remorse? Maybe I read it wrong. Anyways, very nice. Thanks.

* thermometer off (you could probably suck it up to 100 with those teeth) ;)

very good for a first entry....i liked it.

wenchplease

was going to be horribly clich?. Thank you for surprising me!

dear eclipsed one... a shiver pulled and clawed its way up my spine and held fast! BEAUTIFUL! just BEAUTIFUL! kata sis

the writing is only eclipsed by her own beauty thank you for writing such a lovly poem....

Wonderful imagery...

SN