- Non-Erotic Poetry
- In The Night Garden
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Click hereHis ivory thorn, sharp, biting
A life-tinted rose
Harvested in the night garden
Ebb and flow, watered by tears
Nourished in sleep, in darkness
She rises with the moon
To find a rose-bed
To pass on his roses
To harvest her own
- COMMENTS
Tripwirealmost 20 years agothe writing is only eclipsed by her own beauty thank you for writing such a lovly poem....
Anonymousalmost 20 years agodear eclipsed one... a shiver pulled and clawed its way up my spine and held fast! BEAUTIFUL! just BEAUTIFUL! kata sis
lostandfounderalmost 20 years agowas going to be horribly clich?. Thank you for surprising me!
tungtied2ualmost 20 years agoEach line builds well on the previous. The only line I didn't get,
Ebb and flow, watered by tears
Do vampires experience remorse? Maybe I read it wrong. Anyways, very nice. Thanks.
* thermometer off (you could probably suck it up to 100 with those teeth) ;)
duckiesmutalmost 20 years agoClear voice expressing strong, full, honest thoughts.
Lovely.
sensually_yoursalmost 20 years agoVery sweet.. moving.. lots of emotions involved.. looking forward to many more sis.. *snerkles you*
flyguy69almost 20 years agoAs tender, threatening, and as beautiful as the roses.
jd4georgealmost 20 years agoFor your first posting here, this is wonderful. From the reference in the title to the tightness throughout, your voice comes through nicely.
Thank you.
doormousealmost 20 years agoI don't think I've read your stuff before, but that was really beautiful!! ;-)
