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Click hereHis ivory thorn, sharp, biting
A life-tinted rose
Harvested in the night garden
Ebb and flow, watered by tears
Nourished in sleep, in darkness
She rises with the moon
To find a rose-bed
To pass on his roses
To harvest her own
the writing is only eclipsed by her own beauty thank you for writing such a lovly poem....
dear eclipsed one... a shiver pulled and clawed its way up my spine and held fast! BEAUTIFUL! just BEAUTIFUL! kata sis
was going to be horribly clich?. Thank you for surprising me!
Each line builds well on the previous. The only line I didn't get,
Ebb and flow, watered by tears
Do vampires experience remorse? Maybe I read it wrong. Anyways, very nice. Thanks.
* thermometer off (you could probably suck it up to 100 with those teeth) ;)
Clear voice expressing strong, full, honest thoughts.
Lovely.
Very sweet.. moving.. lots of emotions involved.. looking forward to many more sis.. *snerkles you*
As tender, threatening, and as beautiful as the roses.