by Miss Oatlash
...IS really strong (other than the line 'ghosts of summers past) -- This is power in its conciseness and word choice, and some of the phrases really pack a wallop.
Your anger is warrented. Kill it, Miss Oatlash, write it to death.
it's time for the exorcism of the demon lurking within.
Great job on this! :)
no matter how much you want to, you can't cast out demons.
all you can do is watch it destroy the one you love.
i too am sorry your aunt is facing such a demon, it's a hard place to be in or watching.
best regards to you.
at first this sort of scared me :)
good poem, Miss O, enjoyed your internal rhyme, and your observations.
comes in many shapes, here it is a poem. I came to it late but I'm so glad I finally found it. With my PC comes many best wishes.
Tess
And gut-wrenching ~
and I am but a man;
I can just imagine a woman
reacting to these words.
~
Give it a permanent 5.00 so all can read.