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by Sinsualmind

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BlueskyBeautyBlueskyBeautyalmost 20 years ago
well done!

another 1 with spuratic rhyme. i know many here aren't fond of it but this poem danced so sweetly.

lovely poem hun!

Syndra LynnSyndra Lynnalmost 20 years ago
This is wonderful!

Amazing rhythm and sexual tension.

flyguy69flyguy69almost 20 years ago
Extraordinary promise

from this new poet. Very strong erotica, and i like the colloquial language. The jazz/musical metaphor could have been tighter, IMHO.

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