All Comments on 'Late Evening Breeze'

...and this could become quite lovely.

Hi, the poem has potential. There are some very nice lines:

Clandestine murmurs glide by on the breeze of a late summer night.

A blown kiss catching and meeting on the late evening breeze

crap another prose piece hiding out in poetry land. Then

I realized the longer lines were hiding the two of you from

my prying eyes. I think you got some good advice in the

first two posts, but it is a meaningful read to me.