All Comments on 'Monsalvat'

My only problem was with the commas. Although they may be grammatically correct, they tend to impede the flow of words.

But the ideas were gorgeous. Loved it overall.

This is a truely wonderful piece. Great imagery and so economical with the words. Wow. Deep bows.

The entire poem is simply wonderful! I really love the stanzas with the graceful birds and acid songs. Ahh... I'm going to read it once more, it's so good. :)

This poem has been selected for listing in Wednesday's New Poems Review.<br>

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