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Click herePelicans and Gulls wing the sunny blue sky
soaring upon her mighty winded breaths
The sea spray, her breezy fragrance aloft
over forever changing dunes, timeless wrinkles
Her hair waves in sun sparkling curls
the surf's tongue swells, lapping the beach
some-days, deblume blooms, but today,
nothing more than a quarter's worth of a sand dollar appears
White sand, a sign of her kind and gentle side
Mother Nature kissing Padre Island's shore
in the sun the taste of salt on your tongue, and the sea breeze caressing your face, can I have a little umbrella too? Thanks for another good read and smiles :)
Very nice, the imagery made me feel like I was there. Thanks for the trip to the beach at Padre Island.
there is deceptive simplicity in the language used in this poem. looking closer, i see some clever wording that has appeal for me. i think in line one, 'sunny' is a redundant word because the word 'blue' gives you already the picture of a sunny day.
i love the imagery and the alliteration enhances the images/sounds. thanks for sharing this one.