by fawnie
Man I'm glad I looked at the board this morning. The
best surf description I've seen. Do it right, do it quick.
Like every 7th wave, you carry a force stronger than
the rest.
really well done! I'm late reading most of the poems and I'm amazed and envious of this good stuff. But not envious enough to not want more. :)
voice in the vastness of aquatic poems. A unique beauty, fawnie, truly.
...Fawnie. Everything you write gets stronger! No extras, nothing that's not needed. Write like this for a while, and when you expand again, the words will be pure.
rule! This is a wonderful collection of words in just the right lines.