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All Comments on 'Saying Goodbye..'

by LadyCibelle

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sandspikesandspikeover 19 years ago
No good goodbye

Your poem made me think of a couple of songs. Leaving on

a Jetplane and Daniel. Thats the reason I love it. I'm

sorry he ain't coming back. Not the greatest poetry form

but straight fom the heart, hey there's another song.

GOOD JOB!

TathagataTathagataover 19 years ago
Your poem

has been mentioned on the poetry review thread

DeepAsleepDeepAsleepover 19 years ago
I hate standing

in the terminal, hand pressed against the window.

I liked this. Thank you.

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