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My Erotic TrailMy Erotic Trailalmost 16 years ago
(~_~)

thanks for the read!

KOLKOREKOLKOREalmost 16 years ago
more than hundred years they still fought...

For the Brits another stone to the royal crown, to the "natives": lost lives land but no lost pride...Many decades later (MORE than hundred years...) many more young soldiers died and the Jewel returned to its owners.

bluebellbluebellalmost 16 years ago
Quietly fierce

Great job. You know I'm not much on the battle poems but this is really an excellent blend of the battle and the humanity. Well done, you.

Stella_OmegaStella_Omegaalmost 16 years ago
Everyman in battle

This is an excellent character study of an abused life finding focus as a soldier. I especially like the way the laconic meter brings this man's voice into focus.

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Many moons ago a story took shape and begged to be born. However, the characters took control and the story made a completely unexpected and surprising crossdressing turn...and I went with it. Readers enjoyed it so I did some lather, rinse repeat on the theme and they seemed t...