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Click herefor Bill Evans
that left hand, its little clusters of stars
the gentle drift of the right—
sleepy stream slipping over stones
how could we know this dreamy sound
was a body floating face down
so always graceful, always calm?
I know it's a "short set" but I can't help wishing it was a longer. How about a "take two"?
its.. clusters - wondering out loud about the word choice
sleepy stream slipping over stones - we think of this shit, eh?
new readers, these comments are meant to be extremely complimentary, attention to fine details, but i am curious about the first