All Comments on 'Take Five'

I like this poem. I didn't even hate "fruits of passion" It somehow fits. This is a dark poem, with bits that are decidedly erotic, well they spoke to my *cough* um... poetic sensibilities. Read this poem, and tell me what you think.

...poet whose verse shows more maturity than most other fresh faces here. The images are sharp and tight for the most part, line break is well-executed, and phrasing original. Further offering by this poet should be read by everyone! Please keep sharing.