All Comments on 'The Whisper In My Heart'

You create such breathless anticipation with your words.

Beautifully done! Please keep writing more great poems like this one.

Cheers,

Lalenya :^)

,,,read, and very interestingly structured and rhymed. Quite enjoyable.

Very erotic, I loved it

tasteful and erotic and a very cool rhyme scheme.

Nicely Done

Thank you

rhyme and sex, and it was very nicely done..it flowed really well

i liked it!