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by irishcatsmeow

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annaswirlsannaswirlsalmost 20 years ago
travelin'

I especially liked these lines:

"no tripping round-the-world

no globe-trotting jet lag"

Have you thought about breaking up the list a little bit? There are a lot of people who avoid list poems like this, they do not bug me too much :) It is all a matter of taste :)

Nice work, thanks for playing!

no thermom

lostandfounderlostandfounderalmost 20 years ago
Nice....

short and sweet. A moon poem about a day dreamer. Good work!

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