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by DeepAsleep

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flyguy69flyguy69almost 20 years ago
hard to vote

I hope you don't pay any attention to your voting scores, DA: I have had to use a new scale. Your worst get 4's from me despite the fact they are 6's compared with most of lit! Another remarkable offering.

WickedEveWickedEvealmost 20 years ago
ignoring the line breaks,

I found a fantastic poem. I think you should go back and steal the clock.

jd4georgejd4georgealmost 20 years ago
As neonurotic said...

..."delivered with a swagger". Just be careful not to swagger when you're one beer short.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 20 years ago
Enjoyed

this vignette of yours with the thoughts entwined. Cleverly designed images delivered with a swagger. Thanks

twelveoonetwelveoonealmost 20 years ago
What can I say?

first six lines grabbed me

followed it through

yeh I liked the rhythm

the flow and the laughter

but the question

that was asked

sadly went unanswered

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